Reviews on "Two Conversations" by 
YKuang
Written by samuraigurl1213 on chapter #1.
(February 13th 2008, 5pm)Nice.
-Em
Written by blue_jeans on chapter #1.
(November 8th 2007, 4am)LOL. i love this. its just so funny!! (:
great job!
Written by enchantedsleeper on chapter #1.
(August 13th 2007, 1pm)Hahahaha! That's so funny XD "Well, my toe fungus apologizes for distracting me from you two years ago." That does sound like the kind of thing Luna would come up with. Except with her it'd be a toe fungus that speaks in Mermish and ... invades your dreams, or something.
I envy Harry with his odd socks, they're so cool. And what's wrong with drinking sugarless coffee? Adding sugar messes up the taste.
Written by Anonymous on chapter #1.
(January 24th 2006, 3am)I was grinning like an idiot as well. I could totally see that happening! Very in cannon, very cute, very warm and fuzzy. Good job.
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(December 25th 2005, 8am)
Oy_Angelina on chapter #1.The strange thing is I could see this happening...sort of. Some of the weirdest conversations happen when you stay up too late or get up too early and it's a toss up which of the two it is at 4 in the morning.
But isn't that what we remember best of the ones we love? The stupid things that prove we knew them - the real them. Anyone can find out a person's birthday, guess their favorite color, or sum up the events of their overall life, but it takes those who really know and care to remember that bizarre thing you said at 4 in the morning, the same morning they realized you don't take sugar with coffee.
I rest easy knowing Harry and Ginny will always have toe-fungus.
Written by Anonymous on chapter #1.
(October 1st 2005, 8pm)cute!
-shantiWritten by Anonymous on chapter #1.
(September 28th 2005, 3pm)I've got to admit to two things first:
1) I don't normally read fics outside of the L/J ship, but there have been exceptions (this one-shot included).
and
2) My dad has a toe fungus, it's discusting, and we constantly pick on him for it.Ok, so now the real review.
I liked it. I was drawn in by the fungus thing, and boy am I glad of that now. And unless JKR decides to throw in a tidbit about Harry despising coffee, I think your claim to canon is safe. ;)
The insight about Harry and Hermione's similarities was something I'd never considered before, but oh so true!
Out of curiosity, where did you picture the second scene taking place?
-TraceyWritten by Anonymous on chapter #1.
(September 16th 2005, 4am)This was very cute and I enjoyed it a lot. I'm going to make a point of it to read more of your stuff later when it isn't one in the morning :)
~Shayomac
Written by Anonymous on chapter #1.
(September 12th 2005, 5pm)I love it. It made me grin, too. It's wonderful how you illustrate that longing for the past in even the smallest things.
Written by Anonymous on chapter #1.
(September 12th 2005, 3am)lmao omg i totally love it! i'll definitely be adding this to faves (if they have them anyway) whenever they get the site up and running smoothly and i have an account.
love
nataliWritten by Anonymous on chapter #1.
(September 10th 2005, 3pm)oh wow. that was fabulous. funny. yes, very funny, but it didn't make much sense. that's okay though. i forgive you.
-Julia(www.xanga.com/Jullybeany)
Written by LaminaCourt on chapter #1.
(September 9th 2005, 8pm)I thought it was very cute. I would have been quite disgusted if a friend told me he has toe fungus and, from the sounds of it, has had it for many years.
The characters were written well and it was, generally, a well put together one-shot.
Bravo!Written by Anonymous on chapter #1.
(September 9th 2005, 4am)See Lynn, I have a huge problem. A day or two ago, you mods posted this whole long post about reviewing. Now, don't get me wrong, I can do constructive critiques. Totally. Usually there's at least one thing about a story which bothers me enough to mention it in my reviews. But there's certain stories and authors where you just have to gush. You know me. When I love it, I LOVE it. Then I become the queen of gushers, inventing groundbreaking new ways to shower the weary authors with compliments. So, this mod post forbiding it is like, well, cutting off my calling. A sad, sad day. But, since I love all you mods, I will oblige you with a constructive comment.
"Merry Christmas," shouldn't have the comma after it.
There. Happy?
The rest was completely, amazingly, wonderfully brilliant, and maybe after an hour of serious study I will be able to detect some other miniscule flaw, but right now it's pretty darn great.
- Gwen
Written by Anonymous on chapter #1.
(September 9th 2005, 4am)I love you quite a bit, you know.
This is probably my favorite drabble, not only because it's for me (I can't help it, I must gloat at least a little bit), but because it's one of the only ones I've read (besides yours) that use the now canon wisely and are original. No weddings or anything, thank you very much.
I've never had a ficlet dedicated to me. You rock my socks, dear.
Written by Anonymous on chapter #1.
(September 9th 2005, 2am)*bonks self on head* It really is late, I guess. The last review (should be "That was lovely...") was from me, Julie, or Olorwen on LJ. Cheers, and good night!
Written by Anonymous on chapter #1.
(September 9th 2005, 2am)That was lovely! Your summary caught me, you see, and your title. I'm fond of deep conversations at four am, or three or five for that matter, and toe fungus seems to just make sense at that hour. In the midst of the first homework of the year, this little fic made me smile. I love the present tense, and the seemingly random bits of conversation that all draw together. I wish I could write like this, really. It's so... real. So, thank you, you made my night.
Written by Anonymous on chapter #1.
(September 9th 2005, 2am)Oh my goodness that's great. Grand. Wonderfully funny.
And what's better is that it has meaning as well. I love how you incorporated the humor as well as the angstish stuff. It's very hard to do that, and do it successfully, but you've managed it. I also love the style. With Harry's thoughts as the main flow of the piece. How it's second person but with Harry's thoughts and in the present tense.
The title isn't bad. But it's not wonderful either. Obviously it relates to the fic very well considering they are two conversations at four in the morning concerning toe fungus (I must chuckle here. Chuckle chuckle.) But it didn't really catch my eye at first.
Anyways, I absolutely adored it! Superbulous job!
-holly (Same one that reviewed whispers. Can you tell I like your style?)
Written by Anonymous on chapter #1.
(September 9th 2005, 12am)Oh, that was just too sweet! Poor Harry, remembering the similar situation a year ago...Its just sad to see how time flies and how things change so drastically in a year. I liked how you show that Harry is still thinking about Ginny, and that you did put in something about Ron and Hermione's relationship. You didn't force it in, it just flowed. Which was nice. Good job! Keep writing!
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